Needs More Cowbell... I mean Action.
It's a pretty good Remix, but as Yos said, it needs a bit more action to it. I kept on expecting it to break into some intense Metal Guitar Reprisal, or something.
I don't mean to be hard on you, it is a good Mix, but I think you could have probably done a bit of a better job on it, and I don't really feel it suited the Character it was based on.